It rains, anyway
By ladylazarus
Mon, 03 Nov 2008
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We’d spent the morning conjuring sun,
but it rained anyway.
I kissed the taste of it from your mouth,
your shoulders level with the horizon
as the sky bruised and cracked.
We wore the wrong coats for the wrong day,
skidded over heather, as sheep bellowed reproaches at us.
Lifted our collars against insistent drops,
watched our feet disappear in mist, as the clouds rolled.
Back to your room, not the wind on my face but your breath.
We rain danced, conjured sun.
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'your shoulders level with
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
'your shoulders level with the horizon
as the sky bruised and cracked.'
- I was entanced by this beautiful imagery, and the whole poem was indeed a joy to read!
Magic xxx
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Yes, there's lots to like
Permalink Submitted by chelseyflood on
Yes, there's lots to like here. I was also impressed by the shoulder horizon line. Such a vivid image, that will stay with me for a while.
Nice work.
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