Hong Kong 1938
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By Ewan
Wed, 10 Dec 2008
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7 comments
Paper Tiger, Paper Moon,
the Year of the Pig is gone too soon.
The hell money burns
to bring good joss;
boys at the godown
play pitch and toss.
Smell the Diesel, smell the piss
Kowloon City was never like this.
The doctor paints on
plant fiber paper
lights more incense
with a tallowfat taper.
Light the lantern, light the fuse;
bold firecrackers for the New Year's news.
Baby in the gutter,
food for the rats,
sewer on the surface,
lucky black cats.
Gweilos shouting, gweilos drunk,
two-dollar kai-tai swallows their spunk.
Down on the dock side
another one dies
cold alley hides her
from the oval eyes.
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Comments
Congratulations on the win
Congratulations on the win Ewan I thought this was great when I read it first time and I haven't changed my mind. It is so real. Val
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Me too. It's amazing how you
Me too. It's amazing how you evoke a time and place. I could hear the firecrackers and smell the smoke.
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I can only echo what has
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I can only echo what has been said. Brilliant writing in every sense of the word.
Tina
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The best poem I have read on
The best poem I have read on here for ages. Richly deserved.
Ralph
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Congratulations on your win.
Congratulations on your win. This is a brilliant piece. It kind of reminds me of growing up in Penang, Malaysia and the local Chinese festivals I remember from then.
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Very many congratulations,
Very many congratulations, Ewan, I could not have lost to a worthier opponent! Superb writing!
Jen xx
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