War
By aardvark1500
Fri, 16 Jan 2009
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3 comments
The bugle sounds,
The guns are cocked,
The whistle blows,
Their fates are locked.
They scramble up,
And scrable on,
Hear a shot,
Their lives are gone.
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Brief and very effective.
Permalink Submitted by Kurt Rellians on
Brief and very effective.
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nice, short and... well i
Permalink Submitted by DarkWingedAngel on
nice, short and... well i would say sweet but it is really inappropriate, so it is short and effective :) xxx
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