sonnet
By Pattyo
Sun, 01 Feb 2009
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Graceful and caring, she comes to no harm.
Longing and lust flowing through my essence.
I wish I could have her sleep in my arms;
I would risk all to be in her presence.
Her glowing auburn eyes, move with such grace,
Her luscious skin is a delight to touch.
Her face her hair through it all I trace,
Her body and mine, I love her so much.
Her perfectly shaped mouth curves to a smile,
She is my world now, we walk down the aisle.
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If this is a 'poem for
If this is a 'poem for English' homework, then capitalise your I's and reconsider some of the punctuation and you'll have both a cracking poem and a teacher with a lovely big smile!
J x
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This is a nice sonnet, the
Permalink Submitted by Mister_Mac on
This is a nice sonnet, the second quatrain in particular is strong. The "glowing auburn eyes" is a great image.
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Hey Pat, really love your
Hey Pat, really love your sonnet...it's really pretty!!! Well done! Love Jenny x :)
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