Questions
By Ewan
Sun, 15 Feb 2009
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Isn't there more to winning
than being there at the end?
Or more to an argument,
than having the last, bitter word?
Are you so paranoid, that
you project your own failings
on others? Too self-important
to see any self-obsession?
Are we all each other, hiding
behind alternatives, but
you? Do you consider you
might -really- be less than right?
Of course not. Right is
part of self-righteous,
after all.
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This strikes a chord with me
Permalink Submitted by onemorething on
This strikes a chord with me right now. And, in fact, I think it's very good.
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Nice poem Ewan, now I have
Permalink Submitted by Crackersville on
Nice poem Ewan, now I have to continue with my discreet inquiry. Where were you at the time of the parody? Chuck has a watertight alibi. And have you ever worked as a butler? (Chuck's alibi).
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Are we all each other,
Permalink Submitted by littleditty on
Are we all each other, hiding
behind alternatives,
cool lines Ewan
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*Tip-toes around cause of
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
*Tip-toes around cause of poem* Nonetheless it is a smashing piece Ewan ;)
Loved this part;
'Isn't there more to winning
than being there at the end?'
And the ending was briliantly brutal! Well done.
Magic xxx
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No dear Titor! I'm simply
Permalink Submitted by Crackersville on
No dear Titor! I'm simply protecting you from Vatican's hitmen and Scientologists.
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Well I hope you don't think
Well I hope you don't think I'm taken in by the friendly tone. It's an old stalker trick.
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Is it? Ich had no idea.
Permalink Submitted by Crackersville on
Is it? Ich had no idea.
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Clearly an amateur stalker.
Clearly an amateur stalker. I only respond to professionals.
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Noch ein andere lautisch
Noch ein andere lautisch Versuch. So will ich nicht von Hawkwind angsprechen. Meine Sekunden will telefonen.
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Liebling! Ich glaube das ich
Liebling! Ich glaube das ich habst du in ein Amsterdamisch Fenster gesehen.
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