Acrostics

I love your minimalistic approach Andrew, it's always better to say a lot in few words than nothing in many! My favourite was; Sometimes us a humans ingnore things, we can not see that infact, death is the only way to exist. But should the 'a' be 'as' or it can work without and just be 'us humans'. I also liked: 'how do you see me an annomaly that shouldn't exist?' Can I just make a suggestion for the punctuation, please feel free to ignore but I feel there should be something after 'me' such as; 'How do you see me? An annomaly that shouldn't exist?' or 'How do you see me, an annomaly that shouldn't exist?' Again, they are just suggestions and if this was intentional for a reason I haven't picked up on let me know ;) Excellent, thought-provoking read! Magic xxx

Yes, I too enjoyed your minimalist structure. This is a dark, brooding poem made even more so when the acrostic is deciphered. The penultimate stanza, though, remains positive. Look forward to reading more of your work.