Too Late, Baby

By Dynamaso

Wed, 06 May 2009
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3 comments
 

It became clear,
as the moment drew near,
you were never going
to accept your fate.

You argued and debated;
you should have waited,
patient and alert,
but now its too late.

Now its too late, baby,
just like the song,
to fix your errors,
to right your wrongs.

And just like the song,
you’ll never make it.
You can try all you want
but our time is gone.

Certificate U
Poem
Poetry & Song Lyrics
Love

Comments

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Ditto. Nice work. Tina

 

Submitted by Dynamaso on
NW, first of all, you have an interesting name. Does it mean you only beat up Nazi wives? Surely, if this is the case, most of them would be old women now. And I think you have to understand, some girls always fall for the bastards of the world. Anyway, thanks very much for your comments. I will take on board the thought of linking the 2nd and 3rd. As for more clues, I will leave that up to your imagination.

 

Submitted by Dynamaso on
SundaysChild, thanks for the feedback. Glad you enjoyed this. Tina, thanks to you too.