Hopelessness

By threeleafshamrock

Mon, 07 Sep 2009

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Future accompanied by Hope
and Chance, knocked on my door,
seeking an embrace.

I lay inside entwined with Past
and Regret in perverted abandon;
swallowing Misery, gagging!

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Short, sharp

Permalink Submitted by lenchenelf on Mon, 2009-09-07 21:37

Short, sharp observation....recognition is half the battle? Interesting that you should give these concepts identity, as Nouns? all the very best Lenax edit. Doh! just spotted the teaser to this !

It's a wonder you get any

Permalink Submitted by chuck on Mon, 2009-09-07 22:04

It's a wonder you get any sleep threeleaf.

lol, your a long time dead

Permalink Submitted by threeleafshamrock on Mon, 2009-09-07 22:23

lol, your a long time dead chuck ;)

Thanks Lena, just noticed my

Permalink Submitted by threeleafshamrock on Mon, 2009-09-07 22:46

Thanks Lena, just noticed my answer to your comment did not come up...sorry about that. I am some severe problems with my broadband and it's driving me nuts...that's what comes of living in the arsehole of nowhere, I suppose ;)

I get a strange image of a

Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on Mon, 2009-09-07 23:30

I get a strange image of a perverted 'Pilgrim's Progress' in my head - but just ignore my sleep-deprived mind! Love this and great to see you trying new forms! Magic xxx

Thanks Magic; I'll try

Permalink Submitted by threeleafshamrock on Tue, 2009-09-08 08:10

Thanks Magic; I'll try anything - at least - once ;) Glad you liked XXXX