Untitled Poem
By luke-lewin
Wed, 11 Nov 2009
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There's relics of you in my room,
(And one is a film called Soft Skin)
I see them and hope that real soon
I'll dream you if not let you in -
That crack in the ceiling
That takes me to bed,
That crack that needs fixing,
Crack runs to my head -
But it was the skin of a pig,
The skin of a coconut shard,
Skin curling, skin toughened, skin wig,
The skin of a pig cracked and hard -
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Powerful imagery. Carole
Permalink Submitted by C_A_JONEStechno on
Powerful imagery.
Carole
Carole
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^ Agree with above, but left
Permalink Submitted by shatterboxx on
^ Agree with above, but left me feeling like I wanted something more. Or is it not finished yet?
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