Keepsake
By shoe
Tue, 09 Mar 2010
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There are no photographs,
no keepsakes, or artifacts of his,
I rewind the scratchy reel
of memory, a silent movie.
where men wear braces and rolled up shirt sleeves ,
and women tie aprons over skirts,
a stranger who may
-or may not- be him,
a young man laughing, before the burden of a family
not planned - perhaps - not wanted,
then, a memory of a memory,
It may even be made up.
A father, a child, he is...
throwing the little girl up into the air
for the joy of her laughter
when he catches her.
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I really like this. Loved
I really like this. Loved the opening lines;
"There are no photographs,
no keepsakes, or artifacts of his,
I rewind the scratchy reel
of memory, a silent movie."
Beeme xx
k.
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Hi Shirley, No apologies
Hi Shirley,
No apologies needed, you bring the past to life for other people, even when for you it has possibly too much life already.
My favourite line is:
"I rewind the scratchy reel
of memory, a silent movie"
Such a great and apt description.
10 out ot 10 again.
David xx :--)
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'I rewind the scratchy
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
'I rewind the scratchy reel
of memory, a silent movie.
where men wear braces and rolled up shirt sleeves ,
and women tie aprons over skirts,
a stranger who may
-or may not- be him,'
- these lines are just so beautiful, Shirley! Wow, I really, really love this one! This might just be my favourite of yours... ever! Seriously well done! Love it!
Magic xxx
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This is wonderful, Shirley.
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This is wonderful, Shirley. For me, these lines stand out:-
"A father, a child, he is...
throwing the little girl up into the air
for the joy of her laughter
when he catches her."
Much savoured and enjoyed;-)
Tina
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