Mood Shift

By vidit.chopra

Tue, 09 Feb 2010
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A moment of madness,
A moment of sanity.
A moment of sorrow,
A moment of joy.
A moment of laughter,
A moment to cry.
A moment of geniuses,
A moment of insanity.
A moment of genuine love,
A moment of genuine hatred.
A moment of truth,
A moment of lie.
A moment of childish behavior,
A moment of divine behavior.
A moment of selfishness,
A moment of sharing.
That's how my mood shifts,
That's how every persons mood shifts.
Some find it insanity,
And others the way of life.
I call it mood shift,
Some for the good,Some for the bad,
And some to become divine.
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Comments

Submitted by jennifer on
A little repetitive. Perhaps a thesaurus? J x

 

Submitted by vidit.chopra on
Yup sort of. Made it repetitive. Looked to have a greater impact. But that's how everyone's mood changes isn't it? I mean at one moment you are the happiest person in the world and the very next the most sad person.

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new vidit.chopra Hello! I like this it expresses exactly how you and other's may feel. Impact on me. Well what is a "Thesaurus" does it come from "Di'nsauras".No I found out book holding,mine got from market dictionary. Absolutely true! Last line and some to become devine! May the "Light of God shine!on you.We must let the "Underdog's in.Like the Editor.t.Cook Abctales did for me on my poem,gently with punctuations one or two.For me to put "I stand to be corrected,that's something.As tony's story say's "Hope,Love,Charity. In a smallest corner?.God is my leading light,in all I Do and done! and try.Which has taken many years. Take care!keep writing. like all of this can identify. julie x.

Submitted by vidit.chopra on
Thank you Julie. I am glad you liked it. Well Thesaurus in the sense that after a line the very next line express the exactly opposite mood as in an antonym of the previous one. So a Thesaurus. :) I will surely keep writing. Thank you for the kind comment. :)

Submitted by jennifer gentle on
Good poem. The way moods can shift on a hairpin turn..

Submitted by vidit.chopra on
Yes they can and they seldom do... Thank you for commenting! :-)