UNTITLED 2

By kheldar

Wed, 09 Jun 2010
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A friend of mine found out today
A friend of hers had passed away,
He, like her, was still so young
His adult life had scarce begun.

Eighteen years - too soon to leave
Eighteen years - too soon to grieve,
A life cut short, potential lost
A sentence passed, there's no riposte.

His illness gave them time to share
Perhaps to hope, perhaps prepare,
Yet what could ever ease the pain
Of no more seeing him again.

Life goes on, or so I've heard
But "grief" is much too short a word,
To apt convey the pain that's felt
Through a fate so heartless dealt.

A friend of mine found out today
A friend of hers had passed away,
The end of life we cannot plan
So live each day the best we can.

COPYRIGHT DM PAMMENT 9th MAY 2010

Certificate U
Poem
THE HUMAN CONDITION
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Comments

Submitted by MistakenMagic on
A beautiful, moving tribute, David. I am so sorry to hear about your friend's loss. My thoughts are with you all. Magic xxx

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
And mine, David. This is a fine tribute. Tina xx

 

Submitted by kheldar on
Rebecca and Tina, thank you both for your kindness. David xx

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Submitted by Cavalcader on
New kheldar Hello! David Some are so young to. sorry to hear of the loss of loved one it doesn't matter age. One misses them don't they But what a beautiful way to describe.My thoughts are with you all. Sad.I went go my Capella group got all way down there,notice on door same thing so don't know who or when it start again. take care julie xx

Submitted by kheldar on
Thanks Julie. Hope you're well. David xx

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Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Kheldar David Just lost it all comment to you.so no not ok. till 6 weeks,.now ok thankyou.And allergy gone. done,yes a similiar thing happened to three of us,ended up with chat: it was last time with her by hours,as met from church cafe,chance onto rest: she was a bit merry!We laughing and chat eating thought all gone home early.Never knew till was in papers till a month so,was a shock. But your friends friend 18 sad. I have cut this right down now,a lot happened good. Read out your Crocodile Tears you kindly did and someone liked wanted a copy we sent email. bless you nice to hear from you. Rest up,write when can.Maybe your tribute on here you will read out for her.Like Sister of funeral we all met and asked copy hers.Quite bit happened music world.Tell you later. julie xx