Postcard from Mumbai
By Silver Spun Sand
Wed, 07 Jul 2010
- 3000 reads
13 comments
That familiar italic hand,
in pukka, Indian ink
the sunlight chose to fade,
but after all, you were
a daughter of Leo.
Those few precious lines
are part of the ether now...
yet a trace still remains;
your name, and a kiss
that my fingers cherish.
And that customary
flourish of your pen
at the end – like an ‘S’
on its side as if you knew
time was running short.
“This is me,” you wrote,
“with the worst brass band
in India...I’m the one without
a moustache, just in case
you’d not twigged...to the right
of the frangipani tree.
Oh, and wish you were here.”
So do I...more times
than you can imagine.
- Log in to post comments
Comments
This is very beautiful and
This is very beautiful and moving tina especially the latter stanza. I really enjoyed, sorry I haven't been commentimg recently I have been very busy, i promise to catch up with the poems i've missed. Beeme xxx (i'm sure i've missed some treats ;) )
k.
- Log in to post comments
Very sad but very good.
Very sad but very good. You're right about how evocative handwriting can be, particularly when it's faded and echoing through from the past. I guess another thing that will be lost in this world of text.
- Log in to post comments
Very beautiful SSS. You have
Very beautiful SSS. You have captured the sadness and the joy.
- Log in to post comments
'And that customary flourish
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
'And that customary
flourish of your pen
at the end – like an ‘S’
on its side as if you knew
time was running short.'
- love how intricately you describe the hand-writing Tina. You can tell a lot about a person from the way they write - so I love this little detail! That last line is just so beautifully heart-breaking - well done on the cherry!
Magic xxx
- Log in to post comments
Hi Tina, Once again you
Hi Tina,
Once again you describe a fleeting moment yet open our minds to a wondrous story lurking just below the surface.
Well done on the cherry, thouroughly deserved.
David xx
- Log in to post comments
Good to see you back about
Good to see you back about here kheldar & straight in with the i.p. Kahdai :)
"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "
- Log in to post comments
new Silver-Spun-Sand Well
Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Silver-Spun-Sand
Well deserved cherry!
excellently put together
and all the contents and
images and the pen S on the
side,memory of it all and of
course sad but beautifully done.
Have a good week-end.Very hot here.
Both stopped in Saturday.
julie xx
- Log in to post comments