Tarantella

Love, the rhythm, Jennifer, and with 'Tarantella' as its title, this little gem cannot fail...not in my book. "Predator and prey; we dance, tarantella; you, your cloak of freedom shadowing intent; me, tired and spent." Great imagery here, as throughout. Great stuff, as always, as ever. T x

new Jennifer yes! Do agree with Silver-spun-sand. Very well all done, I hate spider's. I am not poet,your great I can't get all punctuation.sorry thought meaning was tarantula Spider.But checked dictionary dance.I have amazingly done,nearly 90 poems Readings 25O95.The 3rd cherry!advice,help cherry! new version did kindly with all punctuation,slightly done.To mine I asked as grammatically wrong.Purr-fect now,much better,Editor t.Cook ABCtales Tony deserves the cherry! I got not me, for all his kind help. -P-P-P "Pick-Up-A-Penguin"as try out I put I stand to be corrected and all comments please. capital words etc;Been up since 3.am. Over 3 different ways of punctuation,now words don't know.Now deleted most I said. I can't get punctuation. Must go.Confusing me. all puntuation. J X

Like the vibrant ideas in this one, I wondered, perhaps bring it to a hunter/ ambush (frenzied dance - tarantella) scenario. Tarantula's use funnel webs to lurk in. Maybe 'mantle' in place of cloak? Just a couple of thoughts. all the best lena x

It's great to see something new from you, Jennifer! I love the sinister anticipation in this one - and that last stanza is the perfect finish ;) Magic xxx

"kiss me quick, before the kill;" this bit pretty much sums it up for me...beauty and fright all in six words. the whole piece is excellent. jason

I agree with Jason's above comment. Those 6 words had me paralyzed. Simply beautiful.

What a beautiful dance of words.

Good. A harmless nut.

This was great. The beginning really draws you in . . . like a spiderweb :)