A MERMAIDS TALE
By skinner_jennifer
Wed, 11 Aug 2010
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The mermaid swam through warm waters,
lost were her sons and daughters.
'Where were they?' She despaired,
would the fishermen have cared?
Nets across the sea, like spiders webs,
was it something that she said,
that caused her little ones to hide,
or was this just a game, she sighed?
The coral reef was where they loved to play,
just off the Island, in the bay.
On moonlit nights, the stars so bright,
would shine and light their merry way.
But she feared the fishermen,
would take them in their fleets,
take them to a circus,
and turn them into freaks.
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I like the idea of a mermaid
Permalink Submitted by Canary Islander on
I like the idea of a mermaid having a mother's concerns!
Nice one!
:-)
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very smooth - like it
Permalink Submitted by darkenwolf on
very smooth - like it
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new
Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on
new skinner_jennifer
Thoroughly enjoyed all of it.
Like the last stanza
But she feared the fisherman,
would take them in their fleets.
take them to a circus,
and turn them into freaks.
Good fantasy.
julie xx
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I got so caught up in this
I got so caught up in this poem like a horror story! The third part is beautiful! I love fantsy too! K
"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "
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