Girl

By Lady-Bathsheba

Wed, 06 Oct 2010
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2 comments
 

Girl

Trapped in past reflections

Girl

Braiding up her hair

Girl

Dreams of her Prince Charming

Strapped

In

The

State Electric Chair

Take her back

Please

Take her back

Girl

Yearns to make amends

Girl

Cried

Girl

Lied

Girl’s

Mouth

Implied

A Soul Needs To Transcend

Certificate PG
Pot 1
Miscellaneous

Comments

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Another great piece to read over and over, to get to understand what you are saying. Is this a girl that has comitted a crime, is going to the electric chair, but wants to be forgiven for her sins? Jenny.

 

Submitted by Lady-Bathsheba on
Thanks Jenny for taking the time to read and comment - I do appreciate it - I think that the intrepretation of the poem should be left up to the reader to interpret - I could say where my thoughts were whilst writing it but then that would sway your own thoughts of the write and I believe that in order to appreciate poetry the reader must have the final say - I hope that this does not sound like a cop out - If it does then I apologise -:) Have a nice day and thanks again -:)