Summer somewhere
By Louise178
Tue, 12 Oct 2010
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Summer vest denim shorts
pink espadrilles my life
is summer in your eyes
hot tanned skin alive
in an August breeze
along the shores
of pretty shuttered
stone buildings and
well trodden steps
excitedly you shout
you call my name
but you will never
catch me, I am
a glossy picture
on the kitchen wall
a favourite daydream
that is all, a memory
for you to recall....
of summer, somewhere.
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The imagery here is nice,
The imagery here is nice, its not very specific, which i'm sure was the aim, but it certainly creates that tangible(?) memory/daydream of summer. Beautiful :)
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This was so beautiful, I
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
This was so beautiful, I really thought you were
there, to begin with. You certainly captured the
essence.
Jenny.
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Well it did cheer me up-
Well it did cheer me up- with the tan and the espadrilles and the worn steps was a really good line
;)pia
ps I had bet you would like to spell summer in the first lines. Sorry
I am guessing that we may be in Spain? Just a guess here in Autumn. ha ha
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well near by- its
well near by- its mediterranean anyway isn't it!! Ah the mediterranean kitchen hmm- just for fun- !!...x
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Very god, i'm liking the
Permalink Submitted by the parkster on
Very god, i'm liking the memory feel to this piece. Its vague at the right parts but creates brilliant imagery at others, truly enforcing the feel of a flashback/daydream. Really good :D
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