Wet Brooks
By mikeyadriano
Fri, 15 Oct 2010
- 1080 reads
4 comments
Rain had fallen, hard and bright, bright, Hollywood rain,
Running and splashing through puddles,
Sodden socks in sodden shoes squelching every step.
Dancing round mud, skating over cobbles,
Mud splatters bare legs, encrusted. later dusted.
Cloudy, stirred soup water ripples.
Ever decreasing circles, mark drips that still drop.
Rods part as huddled umbrellas grumble.
Dry but not warm old men, wrapped in plastic,
Dogs sit obedient, or strain impatient,
Salt drips to my mouth, vapour rising wispy,
On fields, on water, on my arms.
- Log in to post comments
Comments
So many expressive words,
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
So many expressive words, loved them all.
- Log in to post comments
I like this too mikey, I
I like this too mikey, I love the first line especially bright, Hollywood rain, I think that is so cool :)
Louise
- Log in to post comments