It's all good song
By Kahdai
Thu, 14 Oct 2010
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Sandy feet,
toes touched,
bonfire warms,
smoke in my hair,
spice in our kisses.
Music in our heads,
should I ask what next,
I know I can be more patient,
yet, you seem to have some magic.
I wish this magic continue forever.
I won't want words of sympathy o
just to be there holding my hand
I won't need you to say anything
I won't expect you to understand
To comfort me, you only, be here
remind me, our days in the sand.
And everything, it will be, good
because with you, it's all good.
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I love these lines, I'd be
I love these lines, I'd be tempted to put a question mark after Next, what do you think?. The whole poem is very romantic.
"Music in our heads,
should I ask what next,
I know I can be more patient,
yet, you seem to have some magic.
I wish this magic continue forever."
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Hi Kahdai, reminds me of hot
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Kahdai,
reminds me of hot summer nights on a sandy beach
with the one you love.
Jenny.
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"smoke in my hair, spice in
"smoke in my hair, spice in our kisses " very romantic.
;)Pia
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