squeezing limes

By fluffeu

Wed, 27 Oct 2010

4 comments

life is calling - open your eyes
can you peek though the web of guilt
and admit that you don't want to?

open your eyes - life is calling
there's something within that squirms at the thought

some days

I just want to wake up on a beach, alone
or in an apartment in NY

and then a break down

pick a fight with me
come on

life was so much easier then

Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on Wed, 2010-10-27 18:51

Like this, fluffeu. The last two stanzas, extremely effective. Tina

Permalink Submitted by maggyvaneijk on Wed, 2010-10-27 22:32

Interesting, love the confrontational tone.

Permalink Submitted by Highhat on Thu, 2010-10-28 11:22

I thought it was sad. Maybe I misunderstood ?

Permalink Submitted by fluffeu on Thu, 2010-10-28 13:05

Its both - I think it's just really a raw set of emotions. Sad, confrontational - angered and guilty..