Horizon-sickness

By Kahdai

Tue, 10 Feb 2009
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I looked up & lost where I was looking,
I mixed up the sky from the sea,
I fell through the water & landed on clouds,
& sky then was all I could see.

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Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
I like this, Kahdai. It reminded me of the other day when I walked up the hill in the my garden - the ground covered in snow. There was no discernable difference between the earth and the sky and it was a very strange experience. Enjoyed. Tina

 

Submitted by Kahdai on
Yes! That's what it was like here when I wrote it!

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by well-wisher on
I liked this, I got a real sense of falling, confusion and being lost from this poem; of things being topsy-turvy.

Oh look, a link. I wonder where it leads.

JoHn

Submitted by Kahdai on
thanks well-wisher :)

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "