The Eyes Have It ( I. P )
By Bradene
Sun, 28 Nov 2010
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The look in his eyes told me everything,
everything I needed to know.
The look in his eyes told me everything,
he was planning to go.
The look in his eyes told me everything,
I needed to know the reason why
he wanted to leave me, but he said nothing;
I only knew by the look in his eye..
That look in his eyes spoke volumes,
It was more expressive
than mere words could ever be.
That look in his eyes, was so eloquent;
he was sick of the sight of me…
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You are on a roll, dear Val.
Permalink Submitted by luigi_pagano on
You are on a roll, dear Val. This inspiration points seems to spur you on. Onwards and upwards!
Luigi x
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The reptition works
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
The reptition works excellently here, Val adding to the poem's poignancy.
I have to say, I certainly agree with Luigi about your 'inspirations' of late. Keep 'em coming, kid;-)
This one indeed, a case in point. Much enjoyed.
Tina x
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