Put down (I.P. II )

By Kahdai

Mon, 29 Nov 2010
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9 comments
 

Put down the gun
you dont want to
even hurt anyone
and it can kill.

Put down the rope
you know dont yet
dont give up hope
for someone else.

Put down the knife
please, give to me
more time of a life
and selfish wants to
keep you here longer.

Certificate 15
Poem
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Comments

Submitted by Highhat on
A good take on the IP Kahdai- well done ;)Pia

Submitted by Kahdai on
Thanks Pia :)

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Kahdai, A great poem for the IP. It's all my sentiments, everything I believe in. Violence never solves anything. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Fine sentiments, Kahdai;-) Well done! Tina x

 

Submitted by Kahdai on
Thankyou Jenny and Tina,! glad you like K x

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by well-wisher on
Yes. I agree with all the others who've commented. A good use of IP. I also thought it would make a good song; an anti-violence song.

Oh look, a link. I wonder where it leads.

JoHn

Submitted by Kahdai on
Thanks well-wisher, yeh it had a sliight tune in my head :) x K

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by Beeme on
Great poem Kahdai, great message! Beeme xx

k.

Submitted by Kahdai on
Thanks Beeme xx

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "