Regret paint

By Kahdai

Mon, 21 Mar 2011
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7 comments
 

They made me paint
yet let me choose
I painted it
look at you
my own twist
like an owl
every blade
a different shade
created a bold beast
unique stripes
camoflaged he was not
to blue
sorry I am not
I never wanted to paint you yet
became one of my very best, ever
they made me give you away I regret

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Comments

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Hi there, Kahdai. This 'grew some' since I first read it;-) In the last but one line, it would be best if you said, 'became one of my very best, ever'. You painted quite some picture in my head, I must say;-) Tina x

 

Submitted by Kahdai on
Yes thank you very much Tina am glad x :)

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Kahdai, I liked the idea that you were painting what you were seeing in your imagination, that is how art should be seen. Beautifully done Kahdai. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Highhat on
I agree with Jenny Kahdai- well done ;)Pia

Submitted by Kahdai on
Thanks Pia & Jenny :) I dont think I could ever be able to paint what I see through my eyes anyway! K

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by Highhat on
It' so good that you can paint in words Kahdai- well done ;)Pia

Submitted by Kahdai on
thanks :)

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "