Friendship

By Louise178

Wed, 23 Mar 2011
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Past the gravestones
moon and stars
we will embrace
life's past mistakes
and laugh with joy
for I am the imbecile
holding onto chairs
the walls
shy, embarrassed
as a child
that you can see me
how I am now
there is no talk
but eyes just know
they acknowledge...
but promise promise
you will walk with me
past the gravestones
moon and stars

Certificate U
Poems
Love

Comments

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
This is beautiful, Louise. Tina

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Louise, this is beautiful like Tina said, it's so wonderful when you find a soul mate who is your best friend and knows you inside out, as you know them. I hope I have read this piece correctly. Thanks for the read. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Louise178 on
Yes you did read it correctly Jenny, it is about a close friend, other little bits are in there aswell, thank you both for your kind comments.

Louise