Missing(I.P.)

By Kahdai

Thu, 14 Apr 2011

5 comments

I want to stay here
forever
and not move
wishing
all I can
that you could
too.

I cant leave you
any more than I want to
desiderate
I do not use
Is someone missing me
Is there someone missing
something missing from me?

Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on Thu, 2011-04-14 17:26

Another beautiful poem of longing and needing, a wonderful description of wanting to stay in a special place. Very nice poem Kahdai. Jenny.

Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on Thu, 2011-04-14 18:56

This is lovely kahdai. Perfect for the IP;-)xxT

Permalink Submitted by Highhat on Thu, 2011-04-14 19:19

Yeah a perfect IP Kahdai- well done to say the least ;)PIa

Permalink Submitted by Lem on Thu, 2011-04-14 22:16

Makes me think of Evanescence :} Love the first stanza especially. x

Permalink Submitted by Kahdai on Sun, 2011-04-17 22:38

thankyou all! right jenny it is a bit like my last oops! am glad i got the word meaning right tina thanks pia and lem :) xxxx

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "