Faded like Bad Memories.

By lostallfaith

Thu, 09 Jun 2011

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4 comments

coral pink
as the sky wakes up
flecks of orange powder
pepperpotting the east
yesterday was ruined
trying to build bridges
with the one who couldn't care.
stone wash blue ozone
faded like bad memories
scarred with tattered cloud
looking away as i try to sleep.
tomorrow is a new day
praying of metallics and glitter
as for you, i keep walking away.

Certificate 18

Autobiography

Comments

Hello lostallfaith, very

Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on Thu, 2011-06-09 15:44

Hello lostallfaith, very descriptive and brilliant use of words here. Jenny.

Thank you Jenny. Although

Permalink Submitted by lostallfaith on Thu, 2011-06-09 16:08

Thank you Jenny. Although i'd have preferred things to be different and the view wasn't tinged with such sadness. lostallfaith.

This is a vivid poem - I'm

Permalink Submitted by Luly Whisper on Thu, 2011-06-09 18:19

This is a vivid poem - I'm impressed. I hope you find a new partner who really does care.

Thank you Luly. I think they

Permalink Submitted by lostallfaith on Thu, 2011-06-09 19:30

Thank you Luly. I think they did. Secretly? I don't think they were used to someone who loved them just so. who believed they were perfect and didn't need or want anyone else. Who wanted and was more than happy to share their life with them? these things happen:( But on the bright side, it happens the world over and some make great songs, great poems, great artwork about said points in time. Me, i'm just trying to get my head straight and share what goes on inside. lostallfaith.