Praying

By Beeme

Sat, 21 May 2011

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8 comments

The broken frame;
clings to edge of the wall.
Gripping...
praying for more time.
Like my silhouette-
etched in charcoal
across the bed.
Holding your photograph
like a lie-detector.
Blinding deceit
a ghost searching for light,
running from the gates.

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Like this one, a lot,

Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on Sat, 2011-05-21 22:05

Like this one, a lot, Beeme;-) Tina xx

Hi Beeme, there was

Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on Sat, 2011-05-21 23:05

Hi Beeme, there was something quite mysterious about this poem, almost haunting. Very nice read. Jenny.

yep me too. I love the lie

Permalink Submitted by maisie on Sun, 2011-05-22 01:23

yep me too. I love the lie detector and the photograph.

maisie Guess what? I'm still alive!

excellent piece of writing,

Permalink Submitted by seekerofwords on Sun, 2011-05-22 04:49

excellent piece of writing, as has already been said - "haunting". Namaste, Lenny

easy on the mayo dude!

Thank you very much Tina,

Permalink Submitted by Beeme on Sun, 2011-05-22 11:10

Thank you very much Tina, Jenny, Maisie and Lenny. I'm really happy you enjoyed this so much and took the time to tell me. :) Beeme xx

Thank you SundaysChild

Permalink Submitted by Beeme on Sun, 2011-05-22 19:22

Thank you SundaysChild :) Beeme xx

new Beeme Hi! Beeme very

Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on Fri, 2011-06-03 23:07

new Beeme Hi! Beeme very haunting and mystical Good see your posting.. julie xx

Thanks veyr much Julie, its

Permalink Submitted by Beeme on Sat, 2011-06-18 20:01

Thanks veyr much Julie, its nice to hear from you xxx