'It's Over...'

Really poignant, like the ending a lot.

mattstreatham stole my word: poignant is the first word that came to mind for me as well. loved the frankness, and empowering ending. cheers~! jose hernandez diaz.

a really heartfelt poem lovely :)

Text messages are monsters. I like the bit about looking him in the eye. Texts become another enemy, forcing past-and-future consciousness. Loved it :)

a bit of someone's life- you hear about it don't you? very well coined- short and simple- I think maybe you need to check "liked washed his clothes" doesn't sound quite right??? ;)Pia

new Silver-Spun-Sand Really a good way with poetic words, like the last stanza. I can identify so much with yours. and now he treats me like this. Made a note in my diary, and on the next blue moon, I'll look him in the eye and say, "I'm over you". Times I have scribbled things down, spoken and tried to get answers. Just done another year,but all went well? I think after so many, years one knows them so well, every move, little fibs white lies, I think they call it The price of love. Have a good day, cold looks stormy, so stopped in from going singing centre. The room is filled with, Gladiolis,mauve Chrysanthemums,spelt it wrong,little white daisy flowers. Huge pinkish lilies etc. few days old now. His were sky blue,and deep purple,water coloured had throw away, could stain curtains. julie xx

One from the heart Tina? Thats how is sounds, very powerful and poignant. Beeme xx