Singing Lark

By awsamy

Wed, 13 Jul 2011

5 comments

Trapped,
caged,
clipped wings,
by the window,
looking out,
into the sky,
through the bars,
home,
a stones drop away,
merciless.

Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on Thu, 2011-07-14 10:09

There is something so very poignant about this awsamy, and the brief, clipped lines, are more than effective. Tina;-)

Permalink Submitted by awsamy on Thu, 2011-07-14 18:55

aww thankyou very much im glad you enjoyed it :)

Permalink Submitted by Beeme on Thu, 2011-07-14 18:59

I think this is so beautiful am :)

Permalink Submitted by ScoZen on Fri, 2011-07-15 14:51

SSS and Beeme have already said it.

ScoZen

Permalink Submitted by awsamy on Fri, 2011-07-15 21:45

:) aww thankyou