Let's Start Again

Cherry

By luigi_pagano

Tue, 07 Jun 2011
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14 comments
 

He said: ‘Let’s start again
and give me another chance.’
I didn’t see what he had to gain
by leading me a merry dance.

Did he think he could prevail
like so many hopeful cheats?
I was ready to draw a veil
over his several deceits.

As I heard his earnest plea,
I felt sorry for his sighs,
but he’d tried to mislead me
and pulled wool over my eyes.

Was I willing to carry on?
Everyone would disapprove.
I would have to avoid a con
and observe every move.

He was feeble, he was weak
and his ego was deflated.
I played him one more week:
once again he was checkmated.

© Luigi Pagano 2011

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Comments

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Luigi, what a brilliant idea for the competition entry. Very original, I don't think anyone else has touched on the subject of chess. I like the way you describe, 'calling each others bluff.' Great poem. Jenny.

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on
I entered for a bit of fun, Jenny. I thought that a touch of humour would not go amiss but I have no serious ambitions regarding the outcome. Luigi x

 

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new luigi_pagano Enjoyed it but I am a bit slow, the my insight made me think it was a person, not chess! sorry Jenny was quick to pick it up. Stands good chance for comp. Luigi and it's clever humour julie xx.

Submitted by luigi_pagano on
Yes Julie, it is about a person wanting another chance at a game of chess even though he is always losing. Luigi xx

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on
Nathan, you are a gentleman. Your comment has given a boost to my morale. I was getting a bit worried by the scarcity of comment but perhaps it is early days yet. Best, Luigi.

 

Submitted by Highhat on
Very clever one for the competition Luigi. Just perfect. !! Good Luck ;)Pia

Submitted by luigi_pagano on
Pia, many thanks. Luck is needed. Luigi xx

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
We all need luck in everything, Luigi, I quite agree...even though no one can quite match your wonderfully wry humour. As with all your poems, this was a joy to read;-) The ending is superlative! Tina xxx

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on
Dearest Tina, as I said previously I entered for a bit of fun even though I try my best to produce something worthwhile. Not being one for broken hearts and regrets I thought that a humourous approach was a safe bet for me. I amazed at standard of poems I have read and commented on and this competition brings out the best from everyone. Luigi xxx

 

Submitted by Gilbert on
Well done, Luigi. It`s atypical of your work-wry, humourous and well written. All the best with it. G.

Submitted by luigi_pagano on
I apologise for the delay in replying, Gilbert. I was away for the weekend. Many thanks for your comment. Luigi.

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on
It is always satisfying to receive a nice, juicy cherry. Many thanks Tony.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Congratulations on the cherries Luigi, well deserved. Jenny.

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on
Thanks Jenny. You'll find that all the entries have been cherry picked but I am not surprised as, in my opinion, every piece deserved it. Well done to everyone; let's pat ourselves on the back. Luigi x