Combine
By aimz999
Tue, 27 Sep 2011
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6 comments
Rust burnt with a sickly green tinge,
ivy and sticky weed ate the broken engine.
Benn sat behind the old wheel,
black marks on his face.
I wasn’t allowed to sit there,
a splintered plank of wood was mine,
cold nails hung from it like bats.
We sat under the butterfly canopy,
a decomposing rabbit wafted,
the peacocks and brimstones danced.
We harvested well over thirty bales today,
just enough for winter.
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I really enjoyed this
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I really enjoyed this
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I like your style, aimz. I
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
I like your style, aimz. I too really enjoyed this.
Tina
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Good. I shall look forward
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Good. I shall look forward to them.
Tina;)
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Hi aim999, just read your
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi aim999,
just read your piece, a wonderful...descriptive
read. I very much enjoyed reading.
Jenny.
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