child

By widdicombe81

Sun, 13 Nov 2011

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5 comments

When the clouds have passed over on this cold winters night,
And the leafs have all fallen leaving no birds insight,
and when life leaves know pleasures just the thorns in our sides,
smile, and remember there is in fact an angel insight.

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Interesting little piece. I

Permalink Submitted by ScoZen on Sun, 2011-11-13 20:45

Interesting little piece. I hope Paignton has nothing to do with it?

ScoZen

thanks scozen, im off to

Permalink Submitted by widdicombe81 on Sun, 2011-11-13 20:48

thanks scozen, im off to read your work, if its like your sense off humor it should be good.

Good to hear. But just don't

Permalink Submitted by ScoZen on Sun, 2011-11-13 23:58

Good to hear. But just don't expect to much.

ScoZen

i enjoyed this, the

Permalink Submitted by maisie on Sun, 2011-11-13 20:58

i enjoyed this, the appearance to the eye. However using the same words twice, is a little clumsy. perhaps could be improved... a theasawus?

maisie Guess what? I'm still alive!

thank you, but yes your

Permalink Submitted by widdicombe81 on Sun, 2011-11-13 21:02

thank you, but yes your right, just something i thought of in five mins.