A Very Fine Affair

By Silver Spun Sand
Tue, 15 Nov 2011
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Bach was to blame
for bringing them together;
struck from the first time
he saw her. His knees
went totally weak,
whilst hers hugged
her cello.
Her wrists, so lithe,
so deliciously supple,
and those fingers,
plucking the strings
in such peremptory
pizzicato, sent
his spine all a-tingle.
The rise and fall
of her breasts,
in perfect duple-time
had him mesmerised
as he envied that whisper
of a dress – caressed
her thighs...and yet,
her ‘Air on a G string’
was his real undoing.
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this is really well written!
Permalink Submitted by bethanyward on
this is really well written! I like it!
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Ah have been looking forward
Ah have been looking forward to reading another poem of yours Tina and was not disappointed at all! Wonderful and sensual. I'm not sure about the spelling of pizzicato- but I couldn't find it in my dictionary so you have the benefit!
Lovely
;)Pia
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Hi Tina, there is such an
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Tina,
there is such an 'Air' of sexy lust to this poem.
with the music combined it almost tantalizes the
reader.
Wonderfully descriptive and much enjoyed.
Jenny.
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Hello there Sand Lady. I
Hello there Sand Lady.
I visited this one last night and posted off a comment.
Went missing though, so here it is.
"...pizzicato..." and here is me thinking that this was some kind of Pizza with olives and Bruchetta.
What would we do without cello's
ScoZen
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