Passing Thoughts
By Trainspotter
Thu, 24 Nov 2011
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It's hardly eureka, bordering ironic,
embryonic cells, effectually chronic.
No inkling of hope, just psychosomatic,
a passing phase, no need for dramatics.
Real or fake, these visions opaque,
no guarantees, make no mistake.
Perishable goods, without denial,
consequently, here on trial.
Paper thin, the evidence stacks,
as hungry mouths, refuse to quack.
Whimsical fancies, nothing concrete,
missing chances, for lullabies sweet.
These thoughts pass, page remains blank,
Refused withdrawal, from the muse's bank.
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Good poem. Particularly
Permalink Submitted by Overthetop1 on
Good poem. Particularly liked
`No inkling of hope, just psychosomatic,
a passing phase, no need for dramatics.'
Don't sweat the small stuff (I hate that bloody expression). Your muse will arrive in it's own good time. I am sure of it.
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great stuff. were you in
great stuff. were you in asda today? It's how I felt when I was doin me weekly shop.top work.
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wow, thats brave, I'm still
wow, thats brave, I'm still on Freeman's catologue back issues.
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Psychosomething. Yes me too.
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Psychosomething. Yes me too. Have a great trip to ASDA. Will you bring some milk in?
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Depends what shoes you get.
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Depends what shoes you get. Jimmy Choo's are said to be fine even to run in (should the need arise - which in your case may).
Do yo actually work in ASDA? There's something suspicious about you.
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