‘The day I forgot my pin …’ (IP)

Cherry

By Rhiannonw

Fri, 03 Feb 2012
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11 comments
 

or had I?

“Wrong pin – Try again”
Bewilderment.
“Wrong pin – Try again”
Bafflement!
Confusion of brain?
Card withdrawal
in case it’s consumed,
or they swallow, block it, lock it.
Concerned,
‘my pin’s not hard … ??’
back in pocket,
to its wallet returned –
astonishment!
‘Wrong card!’
– Try again!!

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Families

Comments

Submitted by andrea on
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Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Me too;-) Nice one Rhiannon. Tina

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on
Thanks, — glad you both enjoyed it! regards, Rhiannon

 

Submitted by gerardineanne on
Exactly how it feels!

Submitted by Rhiannonw on
Thanks for saying so! regards, Rhiannon

 

Submitted by steve_elliott04 on
'or they swallow, block it, lock it', i love it. Very relatable for almost every reader, im sure. Nicely done! Stephen

Submitted by Rhiannonw on
Thanks a lot! Glad you enjoyed it! It was fun writing it. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Gosh - this is is always happening to me. Brilliant, Rhiannon...sorry this is so late, but I only just happened by it. Better late than never, most certainly;-) Tina

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on
Glad you enjoyed it, Tina! It was a bit of fun (and actually was from an incident my husband confessed to me ruefully. He is not one to forget his pin, and he really was baffled!) regards, Rhiannon

 

Submitted by jeand on

Hi Rhiannon

I too have had this experience of trying the right pin on the wrong card - such embarrassement and annoyance because I was in the bank and had not brought the right card with me - so had to walk back home, get the right card and walk all the way back before I could do any shopping.

Jean

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Submitted by Rhiannonw on

One can laugh at these incidents - afterwards! Glad you enjoyed the fun write. Rhiannon