I like the way...
By Dynamaso
Thu, 09 Feb 2012
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I like the way
her knees
leave prints
on my bedspread
as she crawls
her way up
over the ranges
my legs make
under the covers
until she is
safe in my arms.
I like the way
she smiles when
waking up
from a sleep
on my side
of the bed
on a cold winter
afternoon after I
come home from
chasing a ball
with other fools.
I like the way
she hums quietly
while cooking
or doing other
house chores
that we put off
until we have
to finally give
in to feigning
a vague sense
of domesticity.
I like the way
she rubs me
in the small
of my back
without me
having to ask
or cajole or
bribe her with
promises of
reciprocity or
chocolate buds.
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Comments
Nice, this, Dynamaso. Good
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Nice, this, Dynamaso. Good to read you again;-)
Tina
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I really enjoyed this - I
Permalink Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
I really enjoyed this - I think the simple form works very well. It would make a perfect Valentine
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I agree with insert,
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
I agree with insert, beautiful in its simplicity. Love the bit about feigning domesticity ;-)
Magic xxx
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new Dynamso Well deserved
Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Dynamso
Well deserved cherries!
And I like the way this poem,
flows so well,into the romantic side.
Keep writing. Sounds very cosy.
julie xx
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