Unveiling of a hidden rose

By well-wisher

Sat, 11 Feb 2012

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5 comments

Between the gold and diamond hours,
a rose called sunset blooms;
a flower for all lonely hearts
to rouse them from their gloom;
for while they wait to gaze
on bright inner vistas of love
theirs, to hold, is all the world
and the beaded skies above.

Comments

Yet another beautiful read

Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on Sat, 2012-02-11 18:11

Yet another beautiful read from you JoHn. Jenny.

I agree with Jenny,

Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on Sun, 2012-02-12 16:09

I agree with Jenny, absolutely beautiful. Especially love: 'a rose called sunset blooms' :-) Magic x

Thanks, Magic. One of my

Permalink Submitted by well-wisher on Tue, 2012-02-14 14:50

Thanks, Magic. One of my favourite books, as I was growing up, was the Oxford Book of Quotations. I love those phrases that have stood the test of time; proverbs and quotes from old authors and I try my best to imitate them.

Oh look, a link. I wonder where it leads.

JoHn

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Thank you, Jenny. My life's

Permalink Submitted by well-wisher on Tue, 2012-02-14 14:28

Thank you, Jenny. My life's not wasted if I can make a thing of beauty; something that makes people smile. Glad you enjoyed it.

Oh look, a link. I wonder where it leads.

JoHn

I luv it. Amazing use of

Permalink Submitted by beaste on Fri, 2012-04-13 21:47

I luv it. Amazing use of similies. Or is it metaphors? I get mixed up. Anyway its brilliantXD

Bea :-)