Rose poem
By maisie
Mon, 13 Feb 2012
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I saw a rose today
each petal stark with contrast,
beaten into pulp against a backdrop
of winter. All life had gone.
.
It's later this year
the tentative touch of spring.
The Nightingales have been seen,
winged into the village on tired strokes.
When the rose blooms again, they'll be gone.
.
Their calls will fill the evening air
with the heat of foreign places,
a scent of summer-to-come.
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Nice one Maisie. I like the
Nice one Maisie. I like the whole thing, especially the last stanza. Correct second word last line.
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Love the nightingales...
Permalink Submitted by gerardineanne on
Love the nightingales... winged...on tired strokes.
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This is no bad poem, there's
This is no bad poem, there's a couple of typos here and there, that aside it's a lovely poem, those lines picked by gerardineanne are beautiful.
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I agree with shoe - this is
Permalink Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
I agree with shoe - this is lovely
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