For Richard Hawley
By ralph
Thu, 10 May 2012
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I wait.
In the rain,
at the top of the hill.
But no view,
no words,
nothing
of you.
Today.
I walk,
a cafe.
Steamed graffiti windows,
fried egg
stained
racing papers.
I drink sweet tea,
chew toast.
Margarine minds,
soaked strangers,
they come,
and go.
Later.
In my bare bulbed room.
I draw open the window.
The crack,
sizzle,
of the tram wires,
bring you back home,
to those other rain towns,
of long ago.
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This is so very beautiful,
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
This is so very beautiful, ralph.
Tina
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me too. Especially I
Permalink Submitted by thanksforthepar... on
me too. Especially
I walk,
a cafe.
Steamed graffiti windows,
fried egg
stained
racing papers.
I drink sweet tea,
chew toast.
Margarine minds,
soaked strangers,
they come,
and go.
Really evocative :)
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Great read, the sparseness
Permalink Submitted by ItsSteveDave on
Great read, the sparseness and the amazing last stanza make it perfectly melancholic.
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