McKenna

By AeroNaut

Thu, 17 May 2012
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4 comments
 

I see you there, laughing
Oh what a sight.
Your eyes bright as sunshine
And blue as the sea.
Your hair is but golden
Worth more than I
I wish I could see you,

Today and tomorrow,

and ten years from now,

Forever.

Why do I love you?
Not just for lust.
Not for the hell of it,
And not just for your trust

There are plenty of fish, as they say, in the sea
Plenty of great girls, but none are for me.

I don't care if she's smokin'
Or richer than Trump.
She's just not for me
She just not my jump.

No, you beat them all.
Because you just do.
When the cards finally fall,
I choose you.

You might just be reading this.
And frankly, that's suitable.
Most love you because your "hot"
I love you because your beautiful.

-Aeronaut

Certificate PG
Poem
The AeroQuill

Comments

Submitted by Luly Whisper on
Yes indeed, I hope she reads it.

Submitted by jolono on
Me too!

 

Submitted by jolono on
I'm not much of a poet, but here goes! The first seven lines don't do it for me. The rest is superb. But the first bit was all over the place, the rest of it has rhythm and ryhme but that first bit didn't. How about ( just thinking here) I see you there, laughing Oh what a sight. Your eyes are like sunshine So clear and so bright Your hair is but golden Worth more than I wish I just want to hold you, You're my favourite dish Bit cheesy, maybe, but the rest I thought was excellent!

 

Submitted by ItsSteveDave on
She needs to see this! It's heartfelt and honest - and something I bet she's not used to hearing. Nice guys don't always finish last!