When the words dont come

By onangelswings1111

Thu, 17 May 2012

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3 comments

Writers block
What a shock!!
Words get stuck
What bad luck!!
They wont flow
What a blow!!
Lodged wont budge
No mental nudge!!
How frustrating
Not narrating!!
Still blank page
I feel rage!!
Head now hurts
Nothing works
*************
Meditate
Calmer state
Mind un-locks
Shifted rocks
Pen now flows
Creative prose
Back to rhyming
Perfect timeing

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Comments

Your so right Stan thankyou

Permalink Submitted by onangelswings1111 on Sat, 2012-05-19 11:41

Your so right Stan thankyou for your comment. Started doing morning pages out of sleep seems to be working.

G.Owen

Hello onangels... your poem

Permalink Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on Wed, 2012-05-23 23:21

Hello onangels... your poem is a reality silent scream, good to let it out. Pierre Berton, a noted Canadian writers says "Write the story, then correct." Too often I had a hard time getting past the first paragraph after correcting each sentence ten times. That can really hold back the muse. Let it out like a kite rushing into the horizon. Keep writing that Children's Book. Richard LP

Richard L. Provencher

Thanks Richard for your wise

Permalink Submitted by onangelswings1111 on Fri, 2012-05-25 08:25

Thanks Richard for your wise words . That is exactly what i'am doing . Not an edit in sight .Which is pretty daunting. Like you say i write when the flow comes and let the through line guide me like an invisible thread. Not being the greatest speller or any good at punctuation there will be alot of work to do once i'am finished. But i believe in what iam writing about and its message.Thankyou for your encouragment lv Gabrielle