An outing for Gran
By Rhiannonw
Wed, 06 Jun 2012
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Outing in the car,
drizzling outside,
can’t see very far,
thoughts begin to slide.
Saturated hedges,
trees are dripping drops,
soaking wet the verges;
but the driver stops, –
Gran gasps, ‘See the flowers!
greenery, and trees.’
Out for just two hours,
little things all please.
When the mist lifts, view
clears of further hills;
clouds drift, patch of blue:
all increase her thrills.
Thankful for such pleasures
when they come her way;
– memories she treasures
in her chair all day.
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I liked the 'clipped' style
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
I liked the 'clipped' style of this poem, Rhiannon, and the sentiment behind it.
It brings back many memories for me of various members of my family, and rings very true.
Tina
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Hi Rhiannon
Hi Rhiannon
I liked this poem too - and am glad that your mother-in-law had such a lovely outing in the car and was able to see the flowers and such clearly.
Jean
Jean Day
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