In Loving Memory
By Silver Spun Sand
Mon, 11 Jun 2012
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This didn’t befit him; he
who, if he had to die at all,
would rather have done so
for King and for country.
Although, in later years,
he would have plumped
for going peacefully
in his sleep...Not this way;
swaddled, like a child,
in hospital sheets, amidst
a folly of crimson roses;
between two worlds...
In limbo, like an oak
uprooted by the wind,
and falling, falling...
On his lips, an almost-smile;
in his mind’s eye, maybe,
it is summer outside. Girls
drift on by in scanty tops
or polka-dot frocks
as he brushes the hand of the pretty
young thing who brings his pills.
For form’s sake, naturally,
and in loving memory.
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as he brushes the hand of
Permalink Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
as he brushes the hand of the pretty,
not sure you need that comma there. Lovely poem Tina!
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Insert is a stalwart on the
Insert is a stalwart on the grammar front thank goodness. Another lovely offering Siver.
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Hi silver. You may have
Hi silver. You may have been over to my place and read "Barred Sine Die". If you have thanks for reading it, if you haven't please be aware in contains very bad language. It's very different from my other stuff and I would value your opinion - of course if it's not your thing and would rather not offer an opinion I completely understand.
Another great poem again from you here. Well done. 7:-)
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oh dear this is so sad but
oh dear this is so sad but really beautiful, Silver
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What a lovely nugget, a
Permalink Submitted by hilary west on
What a lovely nugget, a little gem!
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Dear Sand Lady. Hilary has
Dear Sand Lady.
Hilary has said it for me.
Kind regards.
ScoZen
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Just been in a similar place
Just been in a similar place with my grandad... hoping we all have beautiful memories when we get there :-) thanks Silver
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Can relate to this, and it
Permalink Submitted by InspiredWriter on
Can relate to this, and it is really wonderful, well done!
IWx
Noah
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Of course we will Silver, we
Of course we will Silver, we are reminding our future selves right here :-)
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That final stanza is just a
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
That final stanza is just a pure knock-out, Tina! The poem has a shyness, a tranquillity about it which makes it all the more haunting. Well done on the well-deserved cherries ;-)
Magic xxx
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