Window
By alexwritings
Sun, 24 Jun 2012
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Window
Here at 6am,
the heads and cheeks of houses
bandaged in scaffolding,
I notice our window.
The sill
blackened with wet,
the glass, rippling with age,
and the crowning cherubs
trumpeting "1861"
as the year that these bricks
first took on emotion.
The Airlink bus fills,
oblongs its way
onto damp roads gleaming like steel
a street lamp clicks off
a slouching teen places tables outside Costa
traffic lights receive
their morning’s first clients.
All sense of sleep, gently dissolving.
Except our window
which carefully reflects
the first bead of morning sunlight;
see-through and all-seeing,
like the ghost
of our future supine selves
looking back to now
confusing it for then.
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Nice one Galeforce7.
Nice one Galeforce7. Favourite bit was " traffic lights receive their morning's first clients"
Enjoyable read.
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Enjoyed this piece,
Permalink Submitted by hudsonmoon on
Enjoyed this piece, Galeforce7. Like the crowning cherubs trumpeting 1861.
Rich
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This is such a visual feast!
This is such a visual feast! I love your style!
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Loved that opening stanza,
Permalink Submitted by RachelPatricia on
Loved that opening stanza, galeforce7 - I'll never look at a scaffolded building the same again!
Wonderful poem - much enjoyed :)
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