Twayem
By Parson Thru
Sun, 08 Jul 2012
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Well it's 2am
and I'm sittin here
drinkin my whiskey
and reading Dylan
and singin a song or two.
And I kinda don't know
just where I am
Slipped into an existential jam
so I lean back
and close my eyes for a while.
Can somebody tell me
what the hell's goin on?
I thought nothin'd changed
just rollin along
then I thought about this little song
The kids, they ain't list'nin
to this stuff no more
We don't even speak
the same language for sure
How I ever got to this side of the fence
I don't know
Pour me another
it's near time for bed
got me a whole load of places to go
Don't have time to waste no more
cause it seems to me we're a long time dead
Yes sir
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Parsons, I simply love this
Parsons, I simply love this one. The quiet knowing and introspection, somehow studded with pathos. Whistful and haunting. Some regret and loneliness too. Actually it's crammed full.
Superb.
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Well done on the cherries,
Well done on the cherries, mate. More than deserved.
Rigel
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There's a saying; 'Poor me,
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There's a saying; 'Poor me, poor me, pour me another' and this came to mind reading this song of a poem. Alcohol, the grim reaper, has a lot to answer for, but it couldn't give two shits about you or me. In fact, it's doing press-ups outside my door trying to get me to go down the pub so it can spit on my body in the gutter once I'm done. No wonder the kids don't speak the same language these days, but will they learn where this unhappy chappy unlearned the meaning of life?
A great piece of work.
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A thoughtful piece. Just the
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A thoughtful piece. Just the sort of thoughts that come into the head in those early hours of wakefulness.
Linda
Linda
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Love the colloquial voice in
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Love the colloquial voice in this one, PT. Though I may be guilty of being the aforementioned 'kid', this poem still speaks to me on a lot of levels. Well done!
Magic xxx
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in many ways this is you all
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in many ways this is you all over PT... I could hear your voice all the way through. A great read (& new letter posted y'day)
ddf
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