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By lenchenelf

Thu, 22 Apr 2010

6 comments

Humble Bumble,
hid in a trouser turn-up.

Mum mumbled,
there is something buzzing in here.

Kitty rumbled
winged trespassers hideout,

Bumble tumbled
to the kitchen floor.

Chrissy stumbled
over paws and rumpled tangle;

bungled a rescue,
the bee is no more.

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minor edit 29.08.10

Permalink Submitted by Highhat on Thu, 2010-04-22 21:17

How sweet. I just wrote something hinga ding for the kids too :-D xx pia

Permalink Submitted by lenchenelf on Fri, 2010-04-23 00:00

Thanks Pia atb Lena xx

Permalink Submitted by jennifer on Sun, 2010-08-29 14:04

What a great tongue-twister, I tried to read it out loud and found it to be quite an exercise! What fun! J x

Permalink Submitted by lenchenelf on Sun, 2010-08-29 15:37

Thanks Jenn, co-authorship cred to C, my son :-) atb Lena x

Permalink Submitted by well-wisher on Mon, 2012-10-22 12:12

You display a great love of words and a wonderful sense of fun in your writing, Lena. Much enjoyed.

JoHn

Permalink Submitted by lenchenelf on Mon, 2012-10-22 14:19

Thank you so much Well wisher, Young C keeps fun buzzing :-) all the very best lena x