Autumn or Keats' Correction
By harrietmacmillan
Tue, 23 Oct 2012
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How can you be called mellow
when all around you are burning?
In auburn flame the light gutters
and half-lit hues of chestnut give birth,
To creeping, wombed darknesses of night.
Not mellow, for the intensity of that growth,
That winter tumour, is strong.
Nights are becoming drawn and days
are pencilled in
Vermilion
Persimmon
Otter
Pumpkin
Cinnamon.
Not fruitless,
For what could be better than
The fireworks of your feet,
Delivered by rusted munroes?
Not fruitless,
For after the ginger gestation,
Your gold will bear silver.
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This was interesting. But
This was interesting. But I'm not sure of your meaning in 'rusted munroes'? I guess it is the ripe apples that are mellow! regards, Rhiannon
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