Fibel

Cherry

By barboy

Sun, 04 Nov 2012
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4 comments
 

Hard
Fought
Fidel,
Against the
Right-wing Infidels
And their Christian sons and heirs,
For a choice on the direction of the world’s affairs.
Long-stood has this fierce bastard, shaking farmer’s fists at the greatest tyrannies of time.
So now to be expected that those arms stay raised,
His bright face that more unfazed;
The proud Cuban heart
Mocking death
With each
New
Breath.

Certificate U
Poems
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Comments

Submitted by jolono on
Really liked this in the compo Barboy. Well constructed.

 

Submitted by Highhat on
Really well done Barboy-

Submitted by scratch on
That's a cracker barboy. Is it one of those Fibonacci poem thingies?

 

Submitted by barboy on
Thanks for the nice comments, it was interesting to try out the Fib. I had to write this quickly as I got confused about the format in the competition and wrote a whole other poem but the sequencing made it easier bizarrely. I'm getting started on some performance pieces soon and I think it will be really useful to use the format. Anyway, cheers. :)