Love, actually

Gold cherry

By well-wisher

Wed, 09 Jan 2013
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10 comments
 

The hand that scattered gold across the night
placed, in her eyes, two gemstones shining bright
and, taking tincture from the setting sun,
made her lips glow that same flaming crimson;
plucking only the purest and most fair
of summer rays it made her golden hair.
Sadly she loves a rugby playing twit
because, in her own words, he is ‘Well fit’.

Certificate 15
Poem
Poems
Humour

Comments

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
very funny!

 

Submitted by MS on
Oh, the humanity. Made me smile.

 

Submitted by The Walrus on
And so true - love it, well-wisher, well earned cherries.

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Submitted by alexwritings on
Brilliant! Funny bust also tender and well written. Well done on the gold cherry.

 

Submitted by alex_tomlin on
Great stuff. Short and sweet.

Submitted by hudsonmoon on
lol. Thanks for the laugh. Rich

 

Submitted by HipPriest on
Just wanted to add my applause really. Very clever play on romantic poetry, the final couplet is great and feels like a slap in the face to stop someone mooning over a beauty out of reach.

M. Dugdale

Submitted by bryanhollamby on
That was written from the heart!! How many of us have lusted after a beauty, only to discover that her beauty is only skin-deep? :-) Loved the poem!

Submitted by well-wisher on
Thanks, insert, MS, Walrus, Constance,Tony,galeforce, alex, Rich, Hip Priest and Bryan. It's based on my experiences in School/University. The old fashioned, romantic illusions of a teenage boy/young man dispelled by meeting real, young, modern girls/women. Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks also for the golden cherries. They're much appreciated.

Oh look, a link. I wonder where it leads.

JoHn